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| Creativity Workshop: Week Two Review |
| Sunday, 16 May 2010 13:01 |
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It's been another mad week for me, having slept in three different counties over the course of the last seven days, but all in all, it's been positive writing-wise. Although I haven't always felt very positive about it. Week Two: In Review This week's goal was to write in an entirely objective POV. I actually found it a little bit easier than I'd expected, but with a caveat - writing without a character POV makes me write short. My story covered a longer period of time than I'd anticipated, but it only came in at 2332 words. I got all my planning done in my little notebook on the Monday, so I started the actual writing on Tuesday. Writing about 500 words a day (which I was very happy with) I finished the story on Friday. That left me Saturday to do an initial edit, and I have to say I quite like it. I don't think I'll do anything with it necessarily, but I think one of the other three parts to this block might have potential. The story itself feels pretty solid, and I think I met my goal as far as the POV goes - I've just discovered that while it was a useful exercise, I definitely prefer having a character POV, however deep or distant that might be. I think I did reasonably well at communicating my characters' feelings and so on as much as possible through body language and so on, but it's not the same and I'm quite excited now about actually experiencing the story through them. Some of the story didn't pan out quite as I'd expected, but that turned out for the best and gives me a LOT to work with on the next three stories. Well, two of them at least. The third... well, I'll get to that in a minute. I found Merrilee's idea generation exercise really useful, and have spent ten minutes doing that each morning. Some of the ideas I've had have been rather dull, but others have been quite interesting, and if I didn't already have two novels to revise and another three to plot I might be looking at them differently. I have yet to actually return to any of my ideas later in the day, however, and I want to make a point of doing that this week. In terms of other writing, I managed to get at least 30 minutes of revisions done each day, so I'm definitely counting that as a success. The novel is seriously dragging on now - technically I know I'm working through it much faster than I was, but it just feels like the last 10K or so have been going on forever. However, I think this is partly because I've made the same mistake as I've made before - a few weeks ago I finished a book, and since then I haven't picked up another one. That's fine for a week or two, but I'm realising that actually, I need that additional creative input. Watching TV can help sometimes, but ideally I need to read. I think I need to get back into listening to podcast fiction - I spend so much time travelling, and because I get motion sickness I can't read while I'm in the car or on the bus, so audiobooks seem like a good way to go. The fact is, though, I always get far more excited about a physical book than I do about fiction in any other format. So today I've started reading The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss - the back cover copy had me completely hooked when I read it in Waterstones a few months ago, but somehow I haven't got around to reading it until now. So I'll report back next week on how that affects my revisions! Week Three: Coming Up This week is supposed to be the first of my 1st person POV stories. I have a bit of a problem with this, however. The character I was intending to use didn't excite me much at all, and really is just an observer in the story - to be honest, he probably needs to go. So that leaves me with something of a dilemma. I did, however, encounter a character I hadn't anticipated at all, and she's much more interesting. It will kind of mess up my plan, which was to steadily zero in further and further week by week to the heart of the main shapeshifter's story, but technically it will fulfil my brief. And she has a whole secret life of her own which really intrigues me, so I think I'll have to follow up on that. Gregory, the old fisherman I was planning to write about, will just have to stay in his boat on his own. I think. So. Monday and Tuesday will be designated for planning, as before, but I don't really expect to take up both of those days. (Not if I can figure out who to write about, anyway.) Once I start writing, I'll stick with a daily minimum of 500 words (or 30 minutes, depending on constraints) until I'm done, unless I haven't finished by the end of the week, in which case I'll set it aside until after the workshop. In terms of idea generation, I want to keep on doing my daily ten minutes, but I want to add a review habit to that later in the day - maybe in the evening just before bed. The kernels of ideas are there, but I suspect going back to them again will give things an extra dimension. I plan to stick with a minimum of 30 minutes of revision each day. I'd like to up this, really, but I just don't have the time at the moment. I have fifteen days to finish this draft if I'm going to keep to my goal. I don't much like my chances, but I won't give up on it until I hit midnight on the 31st! |
Comments
I get motion sickness in vehicles, too -- and also don't love audio books. I prefer the reading voice I've developed inside my own mind. ;) But it could definitely expand your horizons, and salvage some of that commute time.
So cool that you let one of your smaller characters take center stage, and discovered that she has her own story. I could take lessons from you. :)
Glad to see your week went well! You're awesome with the multi-tasking!